In english we had to write a 100 word story that had five words in it. For me it was the following words:
Diplomat
Objective
Dough
Walk
Start
Below is my story
The diplomats objective was to go on the longest walk anyone had been on. The start of it was easy but it started to become stranger the longer he walked. The first thing that made it weird was the slab of dough he found on the ground “Why is there a slab of dough?” he thought. Then there was the hole in the sidewalk that was as black as night which seemed to be sucking everything into it. Then it was the bushes that seemed to hiss at him. The more he walked, the more he wished it was over
Molly, you have used amazing creativity and you have been very specific on what you wrote for this.
ReplyDeleteNice work Molly! I enjoyed how added a bit of mystery to your story. I noticed your use of characterisation and similes. Next time maybe look to add some more detail in your descriptions.
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