I am aiming to improve my writing in the following 3 areas: punctuation, sentence structure, and vocabulary. I will do this by writing with a variety of different sentences which will also allow me to use different types of punctuation. I will also use a better mix of complex and simple words.
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Hey Molly! As always your writing is amazing and informative, students definitely should know such an influential life school. While you provide useful information, maybe you could improve by including some statistics? Evidence to support your argument is always helpful when convincing someone to see your own side.
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